Image by Christine Renney
At less than an hour’s drive from the City, the compound wasn’t particularly remote but it did feel isolated surrounded, as it was, by open country, as if in the middle of nowhere.
The guard had been on duty for three days and he began to realise that his orders had been more than a little sketchy. He knew what to do when the others arrived – his job was to simply check their credentials, to let them in and to leave them be. But no-one had come yet and already he found himself gazing longingly through the gatehouse window at his car parked beside the barrier.
He didn’t need to leave the gatehouse. It incorporated his living quarters and there were enough supplies in the store room to last him for months. He was able to operate the entrance gate and the barriers from inside the front office. Cameras had been situated across the site and all he really needed to do was sit before the bank of monitors and watch.
He had expected the compound to be busy, a veritable hive of activity, people constantly coming and going and he hadn’t prepared himself for this lengthy period alone.
The guard abandoned his post. At first he kept to the inner single track road and carried the swipe card with him, reasoning that if anyone did arrive he would be able to let them in without too much inconvenience. Anyhow, he had been here on his own for almost a week now and he couldn’t be expected to be available twenty four hours a day.
The guard began walking around the perimeter fence and looking across at the warehouses. He was always impressed by how imposing they appeared, the black paint always managing to gleam even under the dullest and most overcast of skies.
Sitting in front of the monitors one morning the guard realised that he hadn’t taken a proper look at the warehouses, not up close. Stepping from the office he set out toward them, making for the one at the centre. Drawing close he registered the nettles and thistles at the base and the bindweed climbing up the sides. There were patches of rusty metal breaking through the black paint and he could see quite clearly that the warehouses were constructed from thin and flimsy sheets of corrugated tin. Reaching out, he pounded with his fist and the whole structure shook.
The guard saw a door to his right. There wasn’t a handle or a latch but he pushed at it and grudgingly the door swung inward, revealing another directly in front of him. Taking out his torch, he peered in and saw a narrow walkway between the first warehouse and the second which was a rusting husk. Crossing the threshold he kicked at it and paint flakes rained down on him. Coughing, he pushed his way through and, moving quickly, he lost count of the doors but each warehouse was a little more decrepit and at last the guard was inside and it was small and it was empty.
I like the sense in this piece that we are somehow involved in something that has no meaning, if you get my drift. A fascinating story, Mark.
Have you read ‘Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World’, by Murakami?
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That’s definitely what I was trying to get across Chris. Thank you and yes I have read ” Hardboiled Wonderland ” I found it completely compelling . In Murakami’s novel it isn’t so much the pursuit of knowledge but the obsessive collating of data that proves to be our downfall .
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You’re quite correct, I think. And yes it is a compelling work.
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Reblogged this on The Brokedown Pamphlet and commented:
Christine and I have a new post on Hijacked Amygdala .
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The end of everything is so quiet.
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Sometimes the quiet is what is needed. Thanks Barry.
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And the end of this made me chuckle.
Perhaps that is the best thing for the quiet….
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Ha! Yes I think you could be right.
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Surreal and unnerving but gorgeously written Mark…filmic…perfect photo for this piece Christine
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Thank you John from both of us.
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very interesting. Like the Russian dolls, one inside the other and so forth. Very creative.
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